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diff --git a/TWiki/TWikiUpgradeTo01Dec2000.mdwn b/TWiki/TWikiUpgradeTo01Dec2000.mdwn
index 7ff7a671..9d04dc46 100644
--- a/TWiki/TWikiUpgradeTo01Dec2000.mdwn
+++ b/TWiki/TWikiUpgradeTo01Dec2000.mdwn
@@ -20,14 +20,14 @@ These are the steps you need to perform to upgrade the 01 May 2000 version to th
 * **_Upgrade cgi-bin scripts_** ( `twiki/bin` )
   * Rename your original `twiki/bin` directory, i.e. <br />`mv $TWIKIROOT/bin $TWIKIROOT/bin.old`
   * Move the new scripts to your original `twiki/bin` location, i.e. <br />`mv ~/tmp/bin $TWIKIROOT/bin`
-  * Merge the changes in your current `wikicfg.pm` into the new `wikicfg.pm`. We suggest using `diff -c` to compared the two files if you have made heavy changes to the file, i.e. <br />`diff -c $TWIKIROOT/bin.old/wikicfg.pm $TWIKIROOT/bin/wikicfg.pm | less`
+  * Merge the changes in your current `wikicfg.pm` into the new `wikicfg.pm`. We suggest using `diff -c` to compare the two files if you have made heavy changes to the file, i.e. <br />`diff -c $TWIKIROOT/bin.old/wikicfg.pm $TWIKIROOT/bin/wikicfg.pm | less`
   * Restore any additional scripts you might have from the old directory, i.e. <br />`mv $TWIKIROOT/bin.old/somescript $TWIKIROOT/bin/`<br /> (Note that the `changes` script is obsolete.)
   * In case you have basic authentication:
     * The `TWikiRegistration` topic moved from the TWiki.Main web to the TWiki.TWiki web. Change `.htaccess` to reflect the new location, i.e. <br />`ErrorDocument 401 /cgi-bin/view/TWiki/TWikiRegistration`
   * Pay attention to the file and directory permissions (security issue)
-  * Test your TWiki installation if you can view topics. (Ignore the <code>%HTTP\_EQUIV\_ON\_VIEW%</code> you see on top of the topic, this will disappear after upgrading the template files.
+  * Test your TWiki installation if you can view topics. (Ignore the <code>%HTTP\_EQUIV\_ON\_VIEW%</code> you see on top of the topic; this will disappear after upgrading the template files.
 
-* **_Upgrade templates files_** ( `twiki/templates` )
+* **_Upgrade template files_** ( `twiki/templates` )
   * Rename your original `twiki/templates` directory, i.e. <br />`mv $TWIKIROOT/templates $TWIKIROOT/templates.old`
   * Move the new templates to your original `twiki/templates` location, i.e. <br />`mv ~/tmp/templates $TWIKIROOT/templates`
   * Merge the changes in your current template files into the new template files. To compare two files use <br />`diff -c $TWIKIROOT/templates.old/view.tmpl $TWIKIROOT/templates/view.tmpl | less`
@@ -56,13 +56,13 @@ These are the steps you need to perform to upgrade the 01 May 2000 version to th
     2. The "Topic index" link should point to `WebIndex`.
     3. Change the include of the web table to <code>%INCLUDE\{"%TWIKIWEB%.TWikiWebsTable"\}%</code>
   * Merge your `TWikiWebsTable` topic in TWiki.Main with the `TWikiWebsTable` topic in TWiki.TWiki. Note the new variable to query the color of a web. Delete the old `TWikiWebsTable` topic in TWiki.Main after merge is complete.
-  * The following topics in the TWiki.Main web are depreciated (because they moved to TWiki.TWiki), but still need to be present in TWiki.Main because of existing links to them: `FileAttachment`, `TWikiDocumentation`, `TWikiHistory`, `TWikiPreferences`, `TWikiVariables`. <br /> It is recommended to edit these topics in TWiki.Main and replace the content with this line: <br /><code>This topic moved to %TWIKIWEB%.%TOPIC% in the %WIKITOOLNAME%.%TWIKIWEB% web.</code>
+  * The following topics in the TWiki.Main web are deprecated (because they moved to TWiki.TWiki), but still need to be present in TWiki.Main because of existing links to them: `FileAttachment`, `TWikiDocumentation`, `TWikiHistory`, `TWikiPreferences`, `TWikiVariables`. <br /> It is recommended that you edit these topics in TWiki.Main and replace the content with this line: <br /><code>This topic moved to %TWIKIWEB%.%TOPIC% in the %WIKITOOLNAME%.%TWIKIWEB% web.</code>
   * In all your webs, change references to topics that moved to the TWiki.TWiki web:
     * Change topics: `TWikiUsers` , `WebNotify` , `WebHome`
     * With links to: `TWikiPreferences` , `TWikiVariables` , `TWikiUsers` , `TWikiWebsTable` and `WelcomeGuest`
 
 * **_TWiki Access Control_**
-  * Read [[TWikiAccessControl]] in case you want to use the new authorization feature based on groups.
+  * Read [[TWikiAccessControl]], in case you want to use the new authorization feature based on groups.
 
 * **_Known Issues_**
   * Check <http://TWiki.org/cgi-bin/view/Codev/KnownIssuesOfTWiki01Dec2000> for known issues of TWiki 01 Dec 2000 (production release)