From d642343ae4166cb255df4d70fa74076fbad67356 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: MikeMannix <MikeMannix>
Date: Fri, 14 Sep 2001 03:51:15 +0000
Subject: none

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 TWiki/WebHome.mdwn | 10 ++++------
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

(limited to 'TWiki/WebHome.mdwn')

diff --git a/TWiki/WebHome.mdwn b/TWiki/WebHome.mdwn
index bdc764e3..b91fe87b 100644
--- a/TWiki/WebHome.mdwn
+++ b/TWiki/WebHome.mdwn
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <table>
   <tr>
-    <td> Welcome to %WIKITOOLNAME%, a flexible, powerful, and simple Web-based collaboration platform. Use %WIKITOOLNAME% to run a project development space, document management system, knowledge base, or other groupware tool, on an intranet or on the Web. <p>This is the place to learn about it, download it, and try it out for yourself... </p>
+    <td> Welcome to TWiki, a flexible, powerful, and simple Web-based collaboration platform. Use TWiki to run a project development space, a document management system, a knowledge base, or any other groupware tool, on an intranet or on the Web. <p>This is the place to learn about it, download it, and try it out for yourself... </p>
     </td>
     <td width="25"> </td>
     <td width="200"><a href="http://TWiki.org/"><img alt="Powered by TWiki" border="0" height="64" src="%PUBURL%/twikilogo3.gif" width="131" /></a><br /> The official TWiki<sup>TM</sup><br />site is <a href="http://twiki.org/" target="_top">http://twiki.org/</a></td>
@@ -24,13 +24,11 @@
   * [[GoodStyle]]: Working tips for an open collaboration environment
   * [[TextFormattingRules]]: The complete TWiki shorthand syntax on one page
   * [[TWikiVariables]]: How to easily embed text, graphics, dynamic content
-  * [[FileAttachments]]: Upload files by browser for display or download
+  * [[FileAttachments]]: Use your browser to upload files for distribution or display
   * [[WebChangesAlert]]: Subscribe to email alerts linking to the latest page changes
   * [[TWikiPages]]: Customize, rename, move, or delete TWiki topics
 
-> **_NOTE:_**
->
-> _It's easy to customize these User's Guide pages to fit the features and access settings of your TWiki site._
+> _While installing TWiki, it's easy to customize the User's Guide pages to fit the features and access settings of your TWiki site._
 
 <a name="ReferenceManual"></a>
 
@@ -81,4 +79,4 @@ Site tools include utilities for navigating and keeping up with site activity on
 * TWiki is developed as Free Software under the [[GnuGeneralPublicLicense]]
 * Get the current version from [TWiki.org Downloads](http://TWiki.org/download.html)<br /> %TLS%
 
--- [[MikeMannix]] - 13 Sep 2001 <br />
+-- [[MikeMannix]] - 14 Sep 2001 <br />
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