news/2009-07-30: Formatting improvements, typo fixes, more links, some more text for better understandability.

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 11 deletions

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@@ -8,22 +8,26 @@ Sections, no Front-Cover Texts, and no Back-Cover Texts.  A copy of the license
 is included in the section entitled [[GNU Free Documentation
 License|/fdl]]."]]"""]]
 
-A month of the Hurd: *hurd Debian package*, *unionfs* and *bug fixes*.
+A month of the Hurd: *hurd Debian package*, *union mount translator*, and *bug
+fixes*.
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 [[!cut id="full_news" text="""
-> Samuel Thibault uploaded a new version of the `hurd`
-> [[Debian_package|hurd/running/debian]] which improves stability. 
+> Samuel Thibault uploaded a new version of the hurd
+> [[Debian package|hurd/running/debian]] which improves stability.
 
-> [[Sergiu_Ivanov|user/scolobb]] implemented most of the 
-> functionality of [[union_mounts|hurd/translator/unionmount]] which allows combining 
-> the filesystem trees from translators with the filesystem trees of the underlying node. 
-> The patches are currently undergoing testing in the [[bug-hurd_list|mailing_lists#bug-hurd]]. 
+> [[Sergiu Ivanov|scolobb]] implemented most of the functionality of the
+> [[union mount translator|hurd/translator/unionmount]] which allows combining
+> the [[filesystem trees exported by several translators|hurd/translator]] with
+> the filesystem tree of the underlying node (in contrast to a pure
+> [[hurd/translator/unionfs]], which won't do that).  The patches are currently
+> undergoing testing and review on the [[bug-hurd mailing
+> list|mailing_lists/bug-hurd]].
 
-> Also Zhen Da fixed a bug in Mach's 
-> [BPF](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Berkeley_Packet_Filter)
-> implementation and added fixes and 
-> improvements for rpctrace which should help further debugging. 
+> Also, [[Zheng Da|zhengda]] fixed a bug in GNU Mach's
+> [[!wikipedia Berkeley Packet Filter desc="BPF (Berkeley Packet Filter)"]]
+> implementation and contributed a number of fixes and 
+> improvements for [[hurd/debugging/rpctrace]] which should help further debugging.
 """]]