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 Welcome %WIKIUSERNAME%,
 
-You have reached a [[TWikiSite]] (pronounced twee-kee site). TWiki is a meeting place where people collaborate on common interests. Anyone can contribute using a regular Web browser. TWiki looks like a normal Web site, but it allows (and ecourages) everyone to **edit the web pages** and contribute their questions and input. It really is very simple to learn and use, and provides possibly the most powerful way to exchange and develop ideas online, in an open, uncomplicated environment.
+You have reached a [[TWikiSite]] (pronounced twee-kee site). TWiki powers meeting places (such as this one) where people collaborate on common interests. Anyone can contribute using a regular Web browser. TWiki looks like a normal Web site, but it allows (and ecourages) everyone to **edit the web pages** and contribute their questions and input. It really is very simple to learn and use, and provides possibly the most powerful way to exchange and develop ideas online, in an open, uncomplicated environment.
 
 **How TWiki Works**
 
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   * click the `Edit` link at the bottom of the page, edit the text, and then
   * click the `[ Preview Changes ]` button at the bottom of the page to see what your topic will look like (use the BACK button on your browser to go back and fix something.), and finally
   * click the `[ Save Changes ]` to save what you did.
-4. **But this is scary!** Anybody can do anything! The concept at first may seem...strange. Uncontrollable. And yet, collaborating the Wiki way works! See [[WikiCulture]]. (You can define fine-grained [[TWikiAccessControl]] based on users groups if really necessary, and there's full revision control that retains all changes!)
+4. **But this is scary!** Anybody can do anything! The concept at first may seem...strange. Uncontrollable. And yet, collaborating the Wiki way works! Older versions of content are always available. See [[WikiCulture]]. (You can define fine-grained [[TWikiAccessControl]] based on users groups if really necessary, and there's full revision control that retains all changes!)
 5. **Experiment:** To get your virtual hands dirty, visit Test.%HOMETOPIC% in the %WIKITOOLNAME%.Test web.
 6. **Create a link:** To link to another topic, start by editing an existing topic.
   * To create a link to a topic that already exists, type its `JoinCapitalizedWords` name (topics are automatically linked if they are [[WikiWords]], names composed of two or more words with initial capitals, run together).