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-    <td> Welcome to %WIKITOOLNAME%, a web-based collaboration tool, document management tool, and knowledge base tool. This is the place to learn about the tool.</td>
+    <td> Welcome to %WIKITOOLNAME%, a Web-based collaboration tool, document management tool, and knowledge base tool. This is the place to learn about it, download it, and try it out for yourself.</td>
     <td><a href="http://TWiki.org/"><img alt="Powered by TWiki" border="0" height="64" src="%PUBURL%/twikilogo3.gif" width="131" /></a></td>
     <td><b>The TWiki <sup>TM</sup> home is <br /> at <a href="http://TWiki.org/" target="_top">http://TWiki.org/</a> </b></td>
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-**Starting points** at the %WIKITOOLNAME%.%WEB% web:
+### <a name="Starting_points"> Starting points </a>
 
 * [[WelcomeGuest]]: Start here for a %WIKITOOLNAME% crash course.
-* [[TWikiRegistration]]: Create an %WIKITOOLNAME% account in order to edit topics and customize services.
+* [[TWikiRegistration]]: Create an %WIKITOOLNAME% account in order to edit topics and explore customization features.
 
 ### <a name="User_Guide"> User Guide </a>
 
-* A collection of single-page topics: clear, concise how-to guides designed for busy TWiki users.
+* A collection of single-page topics: clear, concise how-to guides designed for busy TWiki users. (TWiki power users will also benefit from browsing the _Webmaster Reference_.)
 
-* * [[TWikiSite]]: Brief %WIKITOOLNAME% backgrounder: first was Wiki...
-  * [[WikiSyntax]]: TWiki language basics.
-  * [[TWikiFAQ]]: The first things people ask about %WIKITOOLNAME%.
-  * [[TextFormattingFAQ]]: Most-requested facts about posting in TWiki.
-  * [[TWikiTutorial]]: A %WIKITOOLNAME% quick start alternative.
-  * [[GoodStyle]]: Tips for an open collaboration environment.
-  * [[TextFormattingRules]]: The full power of TWiki layed out on a page.
-  * [[TWikiVariables]]: Use simple text strings to place copy, graphics, menus, lots more.
-  * [[FileAttachments]]: Upload files to any topic, for display or distribution.
-  * [[HandlingTopics]]: Rename, move, delete pages.
+* * [[TWikiSite]]: Brief %WIKITOOLNAME% backgrounder - first, there was Wiki...
+  * [[WikiSyntax]]: TWiki language basics
+  * [[TWikiFAQ]]: The first things people ask about %WIKITOOLNAME%
+  * [[TextFormattingFAQ]]: Most-requested facts about posting in TWiki
+  * [[TWikiTutorial]]: A %WIKITOOLNAME% quick start alternative
+  * [[GoodStyle]]: Tips for an open collaboration environment
+  * [[TextFormattingRules]]: The full power of TWiki syntax on a page
+  * [[TWikiVariables]]: Use simple text strings to place copy, graphics, menus, lots more
+  * [[FileAttachments]]: Upload files to any topic, for display or distribution
+  * [[HandlingTopics]]: Rename, move, delete pages
 
 ### <a name="Webmaster_Reference"> Webmaster Reference </a>
 
-* Documentation for Webmasters, system administrators, anyone interested in installing and fine-tuning a TWiki site. TWiki power users will also benefit from browsing this collection.
+* Documentation for Webmasters, system administrators, project managers, team leaders, everyone with an interest in installing a world-class TWiki Web collaboration site.
 
 * * [[TWikiHistory]]: a TWiki development timeline
   * [[TWikiDocumentation]]: complete operator's reference, comprising: