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diff --git a/TWiki/WebHome.mdwn b/TWiki/WebHome.mdwn
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@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 <table>
   <tr>
-    <td><font size="3">Welcome to %WIKITOOLNAME%, a flexible, powerful, and simple Web-based collaboration platform, for intranets, extranets, and the Web. With %WIKITOOLNAME%, you can run a project development space, document management system, knowledge base, or any other groupware tool. This is the place to learn about it, download it, and try it out for yourself... </font></td>
+    <td> Welcome to %WIKITOOLNAME%, a flexible, powerful, and simple Web-based collaboration platform. Use %WIKITOOLNAME% to run a project development space, document management system, knowledge base, or other groupware tool, on an intranet or on the Web. <p>This is the place to learn about it, download it, and try it out for yourself... </p>
+    </td>
     <td width="25"> </td>
     <td width="200"><a href="http://TWiki.org/"><img alt="Powered by TWiki" border="0" height="64" src="%PUBURL%/twikilogo3.gif" width="131" /></a><br /> The official TWiki<sup>TM</sup><br />site is <a href="http://twiki.org/" target="_top">http://twiki.org/</a></td>
   </tr>
@@ -8,35 +9,34 @@
 
 ### <a name="TWiki_Quick_Start"> TWiki Quick Start </a>
 
-* [[WelcomeGuest]]: A %WIKITOOLNAME% crash course covering all the basics
-* [[TWikiRegistration]]: Sign up so you can edit topics and select options
+* [[WelcomeGuest]]: A fast track intro covering all the basics
+* [[TWikiRegistration]]: Sign up so you can edit pages and select options
 
 ### <a name="TWiki_User_s_Guide"> TWiki User's Guide </a>
 
-* A collection of one-page primers on putting TWiki to work for you. <br /> Power users should also browse the TWiki Reference Manual!
+* A set of one-page primers on putting TWiki to work for you <br /> Frequent users should also browse the TWiki Reference Manual!
 
-* * [[TWikiSite]]: An instant overview - first, there was Wiki...
+* * [[TWikiSite]]: Instant overview - first, there was Wiki...
   * [[WikiSyntax]]: TWiki shorthand basics
   * [[TWikiFAQ]]: The first things people ask about %WIKITOOLNAME%
   * [[TextFormattingFAQ]]: Most-requested facts about posting in TWiki
   * [[TWikiTutorial]]: A compact %WIKITOOLNAME% primer
-  * [[GoodStyle]]: Tips for an open collaboration environment
-  * [[TextFormattingRules]]: The complete TWiki syntax on a easy reference page
-  * [[TWikiVariables]]: Insert text, graphics, dynamic infofeatures
-  * [[FileAttachments]]: Upload files for display or download from any page
-  * [[WebChangesAlert]]: Get email alerts with the latest page changes
+  * [[GoodStyle]]: Working tips for an open collaboration environment
+  * [[TextFormattingRules]]: The complete TWiki shorthand syntax on one page
+  * [[TWikiVariables]]: How to easily embed text, graphics, dynamic content
+  * [[FileAttachments]]: Upload files by browser for display or download
+  * [[WebChangesAlert]]: Subscribe to email alerts linking to the latest page changes
   * [[TWikiPages]]: Customize, rename, move, or delete TWiki topics
-  * [[TWikiGlossary]]: A short list of essential TWiki terms
 
 > **_NOTE:_**
 >
-> _When installing TWiki, you can easily split up this page into separate user and administrator topics. Also, you can quickly edit the User's Guide pages to fit the features and access settings of your TWiki site._
+> _It's easy to customize these User's Guide pages to fit the features and access settings of your TWiki site._
 
 <a name="ReferenceManual"></a>
 
 ### <a name="TWiki_Reference_Manual"> TWiki Reference Manual </a>
 
-* Documentation for webmasters, system administrators, project managers, team leaders -<br /> anyone in the market for a world-class online collaboration tool.
+* Documentation for webmasters, system administrators, project managers, team leaders, <br /> all other users of the TWiki advanced online collaboration tool.
 
 * * [[TWikiHistory]]: The TWiki development timeline
   * [[TWikiDocumentation]]: Complete current reference...
@@ -45,9 +45,9 @@
     3. [[TWikiUpgradeGuide]]
     4. [[TWikiUserAuthentication]]
     5. [[TWikiAccessControl]]
-    6. [[TWikiVariables]]
-    7. [[TWikiTemplates]]
-    8. [[TWikiSkins]]
+    6. [[TWikiTemplates]]
+    7. [[TWikiSkins]]
+    8. [[TWikiVariables]]
     9. [[TWikiMetaData]]
     10. [[TWikiForms]]
     11. [[TWikiPlugins]]
@@ -55,27 +55,25 @@
     13. [[ManagingTopics]]
     14. [[ManagingWebs]]
     15. [[DocsATWikiFileSystem]]
-    16. [[TWikiGlossary]]
 
 ### <a name="TWiki_Site_Tools"> TWiki Site Tools </a>
 
-Site tools are utilities for navigating and keeping up with site activity that can be set for each web. Extensive preferences can also be configured site-wide, or by web. You are currently in the **TWiki** web.
+Site tools include utilities for navigating and keeping up with site activity on individual TWiki webs. Preferences can also be configured, by web or site-wide. You are currently in the **%TWIKIWEB%** web.
 
 <form action="%SCRIPTURLPATH%/search%SCRIPTSUFFIX%/%WEB%/">
   <ul>
-    <li><span style="background:"><font color="">Web Search</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebSearch">?</a>: Full text search of the %WEB% web </li>
-    <li><input name="search" size="32" type="text" /> <input type="submit" value="Search" />    (extended options in <span style="background:"><font color="">Web Search</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebSearch">?</a>) </li>
+    <li><span style="background:"><font color="">Web Search</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebSearch">?</a>: Full text search of the %WEB% web<br /><input name="search" size="32" type="text" /> <input type="submit" value="Search" />    (extended options in <span style="background:"><font color="">Web Search</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebSearch">?</a>) </li>
     <li><span style="background:"><font color="">Web Changes</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebChanges">?</a>: Display recent input on the %WEB% web </li>
     <li><span style="background:"><font color="">Web Index</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebIndex">?</a>: List all %WEB% topics in alphabetical order </li>
-    <li> %NOTIFYTOPIC%: Subscribe to automatic email notification for changes in the %WEB% web </li>
+    <li> %NOTIFYTOPIC%: Subscribe to an email alert with the latest %WEB% web changes </li>
     <li> %STATISTICSTOPIC%: View access statistics for the %WEB% web </li>
-    <li> %WEBPREFSTOPIC%: Preferences for the %WEB% web </li>
-    <li> %WIKIPREFSTOPIC%: %WIKITOOLNAME% site-level preferences </li>
+    <li> %WEBPREFSTOPIC%: Preference settings for the %WEB% web </li>
+    <li> %WIKIPREFSTOPIC%: %WIKITOOLNAME% site-wide preferences </li>
   </ul>
 </form>
 
 * The %WEB% web is coded light orange for quick identification.
-* The [[TWikiWebsTable]] is a color code directory of available webs that can be easily inserted on any page:
+* The %TWIKIWEB%.TWikiWebsTable is a color coded directory of available webs that can be easily included on any page:
 
 %INCLUDE\{"TWikiWebsTable"\}%
 
@@ -83,4 +81,4 @@ Site tools are utilities for navigating and keeping up with site activity that c
 * TWiki is developed as Free Software under the [[GnuGeneralPublicLicense]]
 * Get the current version from [TWiki.org Downloads](http://TWiki.org/download.html)<br /> %TLS%
 
--- [[MikeMannix]] - 11 Sep 2001 <br />
+-- [[MikeMannix]] - 13 Sep 2001 <br />