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 <table>
   <tr>
-    <td><font size="3">Welcome to %WIKITOOLNAME%, a flexible, powerful, and simple Web-based collaboration platform, for intranets, extranets, and the Web. With %WIKITOOLNAME%, you can easily run a project development space, document managment system, knowledge base, and any other groupware tool. This is the place to learn about it, download it, and try it out for yourself... </font></td>
+    <td><font size="3">Welcome to %WIKITOOLNAME%, a flexible, powerful, and simple Web-based collaboration platform, for intranets, extranets, and the Web. With %WIKITOOLNAME%, you can run a project development space, document managment system, knowledge base, or any other groupware tool. This is the place to learn about it, download it, and try it out for yourself... </font></td>
     <td width="25"> </td>
     <td width="200"><a href="http://TWiki.org/"><img alt="Powered by TWiki" border="0" height="64" src="%PUBURL%/twikilogo3.gif" width="131" /></a><br /> The official TWiki<sup>TM</sup><br />site is <a href="http://twiki.org/" target="_top">http://twiki.org/</a></td>
   </tr>
 </table>
 
-### <a name="Starting_points"> Starting points </a>
+### <a name="TWiki_Quick_Start"> TWiki Quick Start </a>
 
-* [[WelcomeGuest]]: Start here for a %WIKITOOLNAME% crash course.
-* [[TWikiRegistration]]: Create an %WIKITOOLNAME% account in order to edit topics and explore customization features.
+* [[WelcomeGuest]]: A %WIKITOOLNAME% crash course covering all the basics
+* [[TWikiRegistration]]: Be able to edit topics and customize features
 
 ### <a name="TWiki_User_Guide"> TWiki User Guide </a>
 
-* A collection of single-page topics: clear, concise how-to guides designed for busy TWiki users. <br /> (TWiki power users will also benefit from browsing the _Reference Manual_.)
+* A collection of single-page how-to topics for busy TWiki users. <br />_Power users should also browse the TWiki Reference Manual._
 
-* * [[TWikiSite]]: Brief %WIKITOOLNAME% backgrounder - first, there was Wiki...
-  * [[WikiSyntax]]: TWiki language basics
+* * [[TWikiSite]]: An instant overview - first, there was Wiki...
+  * [[WikiSyntax]]: TWiki shorthand basics
   * [[TWikiFAQ]]: The first things people ask about %WIKITOOLNAME%
   * [[TextFormattingFAQ]]: Most-requested facts about posting in TWiki
-  * [[TWikiTutorial]]: A %WIKITOOLNAME% quick start alternative
+  * [[TWikiTutorial]]: A compact %WIKITOOLNAME% primer
   * [[GoodStyle]]: Tips for an open collaboration environment
-  * [[TextFormattingRules]]: The full power of TWiki syntax on a page
-  * [[TWikiVariables]]: Use simple text strings to place copy, graphics, menus, lots more
-  * [[FileAttachments]]: Upload files to any topic, for display or distribution
-  * [[WebChangesNotify]]: A optional email alert tells you when web pages are changed
-  * [[HandlingTopics]]: Rename, move, delete pages
+  * [[TextFormattingRules]]: The complete TWiki syntax on a easy reference page
+  * [[TWikiVariables]]: Insert text, graphics, dynamic infofeatures
+  * [[FileAttachments]]: Upload files for display or download from any page
+  * [[WebChangesNotify]]: Get email alerts with the latest page changes
+  * [[HandlingTopics]]: Rename, move, or delete TWiki pages
+
+<a name="ReferenceManual"></a>
 
 ### <a name="TWiki_Reference_Manual"> TWiki Reference Manual </a>
 
-* Documentation for Webmasters, system administrators, project managers, team leaders, everyone with an interest in installing a world-class TWiki Web collaboration site.
+* Documentation for webmasters, system administrators, project managers, team leaders -<br /> anyone in the market for a world-class online collaboration tool.
 
-* * [[TWikiHistory]]: a TWiki development timeline
-  * [[TWikiDocumentation]]: complete operator's reference, comprising:
+* * [[TWikiHistory]]: the TWiki development timeline
+  * [[TWikiDocumentation]]: complete current reference...
     1. [[TWikiImplementationNotes]]
     2. [[TWikiInstallationGuide]]
     3. [[TWikiUpgradeGuide]]
@@ -48,23 +50,28 @@
     13. [[ManagingTopics]]
     14. [[ManagingWebs]]
 
+### <a name="TWiki_Site_Tools"> TWiki Site Tools </a>
+
+Utilities for navigating and keeping up with site activity are available at the individual web level. An extensive set of preferences can be configured site-wide, or by web. You are currently in the **TWiki** web.
+
 <form action="%SCRIPTURLPATH%/search%SCRIPTSUFFIX%/%WEB%/">
   <ul>
-    <li><span style="background:"><font color="">Web Search</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebSearch">?</a>: Full text search of the %WIKITOOLNAME%.%WEB% web. </li>
-    <li><input name="search" size="32" type="text" /> <input type="submit" value="Search" />    (More options in <span style="background:"><font color="">Web Search</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebSearch">?</a>) </li>
-    <li><span style="background:"><font color="">Web Changes</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebChanges">?</a>: Find out recent modifications to the %WIKITOOLNAME%.%WEB% web. </li>
-    <li><span style="background:"><font color="">Web Index</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebIndex">?</a>: Display all %WIKITOOLNAME%.%WEB% topics in alphabetical order. </li>
-    <li> %NOTIFYTOPIC%: Subscribe to be automatically notified when something changes in the %WIKITOOLNAME%.%WEB% web. </li>
-    <li> %STATISTICSTOPIC%: View access statistics of the %WIKITOOLNAME%.%WEB% web. </li>
-    <li> %WEBPREFSTOPIC%: Preferences of the %WIKITOOLNAME%.%WEB% web. </li>
-    <li> %WIKIPREFSTOPIC%: %WIKITOOLNAME% site-level preferences . </li>
+    <li><span style="background:"><font color="">Web Search</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebSearch">?</a>: Full text search of the %WEB% web </li>
+    <li><input name="search" size="32" type="text" /> <input type="submit" value="Search" />    (extended options in <span style="background:"><font color="">Web Search</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebSearch">?</a>) </li>
+    <li><span style="background:"><font color="">Web Changes</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebChanges">?</a>: Display recent input on the %WEB% web </li>
+    <li><span style="background:"><font color="">Web Index</font></span><a href="http://LOCATION/WebIndex">?</a>: List all %WEB% topics in alphabetical order </li>
+    <li> %NOTIFYTOPIC%: Subscribe to automatic email notification for changes in the %WEB% web </li>
+    <li> %STATISTICSTOPIC%: View access statistics for the %WEB% web </li>
+    <li> %WEBPREFSTOPIC%: Preferences for the %WEB% web </li>
+    <li> %WIKIPREFSTOPIC%: %WIKITOOLNAME% site-level preferences </li>
   </ul>
 </form>
 
-**Notes:**
-
-* You are currently in the %WIKITOOLNAME%.%WEB% web. The color code for this web is a light orange background, so you know where you are.
-* If you are not familiar with the %WIKITOOLNAME% collaboration tool, please visit %TWIKIWEB%.WelcomeGuest first.
-* TWiki <sup>TM</sup> is a trademark of [[PeterThoeny]]
+* The %WEB% web is color-coded in light orange for quick identification.
+* The [[TWikiWebsTable]] is a color code directory of available webs that can be easily inserted on any page:
 
 %INCLUDE\{"TWikiWebsTable"\}%
+
+* TWiki<sup>TM</sup> is a trademark of [[PeterThoeny]]
+* TWiki is developed as Free Software under the [[GnuGeneralPublicLicense]]
+* Get the current version from [TWiki.org Downloads](http://TWiki.org/download.html)